A trip to Hoi Ha Village
Last Sunday, I went to Hoi Ha Wan in Sai Kung with my friends. First, we took a walk on the beach. The view was beautiful. Then, we went hiking for half an hour. It was really tiring. Finally, we travelled by a little boat to watch the coral. It was really fantastic. I didn't believe that we could watch that in Hong Kong. I enjoy the trip very much.
Do you write you diary every day? Do you write down anything special in your notebook? The above is a piece of writing about my trip to Sai Kung. It is actually a kind of recount writing.
We normally write a recount to retell a series of event, e.g. a school picnic, a trip to China with families, a happy day in school, etc. Since it is used to retell something, the verb should be written in past tense form, such as ‘went’ ‘was’ ‘travelled’. Moreover, we can use some time words to connect the events, like ‘first’ ‘then’ ‘after that’ ‘finally’.
What did you do last Sunday? Were there any special things? Write a recount to tell me what you did.
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